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Tuesday 20 August 2013

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My Day At The Laundry

Boom! The door went bang when I walked in. My family walked through the door and the light was bright. When I walked in the door it was so quiet and calm. On that day my sister and I were dancing around and around waiting for our washing to finish.

During that day my sister took me towards the shop because we were so bored sitting down doing nothing but waiting for our washing to finish. We walked around because we were so hot inside the laundry. Then we went outside to walk around and have fresh air. I was really tired when my sister and I went walking around.  When I walked back inside the laundry,  it was so quiet like no one was talking.

Wow! It was so bright I couldn’t see that well but when I walked right in I could see a little bit better than I did before.

I really enjoyed going to the laundry but I didn’t  like it when it took long in the dryer and thank god that our washing was finished from in the washing machine. I was really happy because our clothes was warm and clean. When I touched it felt warm and I felt like I was wearing it but no, I wasn’t.
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My day at the laundry

Boom! the door went bang when I walked in. My family walked through the door and the light was bright.
When I walked in the door it was so quiet and calmly. Night that day my sister and I were dancing around and around waiting for our washing to finish.


During that day my sister took me towards the shop because we were so bored sitting down doing nothing but waiting for our washing to finish. We walked around because we were so hot inside the laundry so then we went outside to walk around and have fresh air.I was really tired when my sister and I went walking around. But when I walked back inside the laundry  it was so quiet like no one was talking.


Wow! it was so bright I couldn’t see that well but when I walked right in I could see a little bit better than i did before.


I really enjoyed going to the laundry but I didn’t
like it when it took long in the dryer and thank god that our washing was finished from in the washing machine. I was really happy because our clothes was warm and clean and when I touched it felt warm and I felt like I was wearing it but no.


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