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Thursday 4 August 2016

Hoverbike - Reading


This is my photo based on adverting a futuristic Hover Bike. My partner Silivia and I were working collaboratively on making a simple ad based about a Hover Bike using persuasive language and many other types of features. This was really easy task to do and I guess this this activity was very fun.



1 comments:

Robyn Anderson said...

Well done Mere. I can see clearly which persuasive language features you have used to hook your audience in but when I read your blurb I see that you haven't drawn our attention to them. Please reword your blurb so that it identifies the persuasive language features that you used. This will help your readers make a stronger connection to your task.

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