This blog is a record of my learning from Panmure Bridge Primary School through to Tamaki College.
Showing posts with label Comments. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Comments. Show all posts
Friday, 22 May 2015
Monday, 25 November 2013
A comment on Ana's work
Hi Ana
I really like the color of your butterfly you drew.Also I really like the image you have chosen because I like butterflies and I still do.Keep the great work up Ana.
From Mere.
This is the comment I did on Ana's Scale Drawing.Also I really enjoyed looking at her Image she choose.
I really like the color of your butterfly you drew.Also I really like the image you have chosen because I like butterflies and I still do.Keep the great work up Ana.
From Mere.
This is the comment I did on Ana's Scale Drawing.Also I really enjoyed looking at her Image she choose.
commenting on Deziree's fabulous work
Hi Deziree
I really think you did well on the colors because they look so colorful and those are my faviourite colors also I enjoyed reading your information and I think you need to improve adding more to it.Keep it up Deziree.
From Mere
This is my comment to Deziree for her hard work doing her Water Cycle.Also I liked the way you did your beautiful colors.
I really think you did well on the colors because they look so colorful and those are my faviourite colors also I enjoyed reading your information and I think you need to improve adding more to it.Keep it up Deziree.
From Mere
This is my comment to Deziree for her hard work doing her Water Cycle.Also I liked the way you did your beautiful colors.
Mere's Comments.
Hi Room 3,
I really loved watching your movie and reading your key messages. Your song was so awesome with the lyrics. Well done room 3 keep the great work up.
From Mere
Hi Room 2,
I really liked your movie it was great.I was a lesson so that you don't show of your prizes.That was a scary costume.Great work room 2 keep up the great work and also yous should make another movie.
From mere
I really loved watching your movie and reading your key messages. Your song was so awesome with the lyrics. Well done room 3 keep the great work up.
From Mere
Hi Room 2,
I really liked your movie it was great.I was a lesson so that you don't show of your prizes.That was a scary costume.Great work room 2 keep up the great work and also yous should make another movie.
From mere
Friday, 8 November 2013
Commented on Shantays work
Hi Shantay
I really like the color you have choose also I like
reading what you have just ritten. The Thing I think you need to improve on is just to add more colors to make is stand out.Keep up the fabulous work.
From Mere
I really like the color you have choose also I like
reading what you have just ritten. The Thing I think you need to improve on is just to add more colors to make is stand out.Keep up the fabulous work.
From Mere
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I really like your movie and the song cause the sound of it it sounds pretty cool.I really enjoyed watching it was amazing.Keep up the great work.
From Mere