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Friday 25 October 2013

My Narrative




It was a beautiful sunny day,best for my friends going out for trick or treating.I was walking down the street step by step, DOINK i tripped over a stone that was in my way.Knock Knock!! boom!!! the door went bang. I said trick or treat to the man and the man gave me some candy for me.Yes finally i got on the other side of the road Knock Knock!! Trick or treat i said in a creepy voice so then the lady gave me some candy.I was still walking i thought that no one was with me so i carried on walking. Suddenly, I heard a sound ....boom boom.



I am really proud of my Halloween narrative introduction because i have included lot of details  and a good hook which I will develop in other paragraphs.

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