LI: To use the 5 senses and personification to help us paint a picture with words.
I
see the sunlight directly flashing straight in my eyes, as I just woke
up. All of a sudden I heard loud footsteps coming towards my shoe box. I
felt like the owner wasn't going to care about me in the middle of the
shoe box then just stand on me and squish me like nothing happened. As I
got squished from my owner, I got kicked outside and apparently I
landed on dog poo. Seconds later the heavy wind blew me towards a bird
near the streets, and on the other side of the street I see another pair
of lonely shoes...
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