Manaiakalani Film Festival

This is my presentation I did on the Manaiakalnai Film Festival, there were loads of movie's that were shown. It was so fun watching different types of movie's. We had to buddy up with room 1 and my partner was my own sibling which is Raera.

P.B.S Showcase

This is my google drawing I did that is apparently based about one of the CareValue's which is Respect. I have done a P.B.S Showcase to get all my task's done on my Care Awards. This is all about why I belong to Panmure Bridge School.

Working With My Critical Friend

Working With My Critical Friend:

Rm 6 and Rm 5 are doing a collaborative Critical Friend. I worked with Tim and we had to check each others Writing Samples. It was Tim's writing Sample that was checked by me. We used this Rubric which Rm 6 and Rm5 share's. We check each rubric slides like Punctuation, Vocab, Origination, Sentence Structure, Sentence and Language and lastly Idea's. I was the person checking Tim's work to help him improve on his writing to make him on a higher standard. The rubric helps me and my Critical Friend Tim by looking back and forwards at the mistakes we've done that need's to be fixed. My message to Tim is to concentrate on your writing to improve a lot more to get you at R6.